Wednesday, December 17, 2008

THE SENSORY CABINET by MARK DUCHARME

DENISE DOOLEY reviews

The Sensory Cabinet, by Mark DuCharme
(BlazeVOX [Books], Kenmore, NY, 2007)

A cabinet of curiosity displays artifacts as variety, displacing the context of categorical distinctions in favor of a glowing interrogatory light. Fish next to rock next to bug next to man-made tool. In The Sensory Cabinet, Mark DuCharme seems to be doing something similar, hand picking odd turns of phrase and fragments for illumination.

But he is doing something weirder. Consider: ''The output / in the clothes that you aren't wearing,'' (36) “'On a starry night, with so many fat tickets'' (80). We can recognize our own tones of conversation in ''Unspeakable'': ''Serious stuff, I'm like / Whatever, her navigator / A really good / Politically correct/ Villain, we're gonna / Take it so / Hard,...''(57)

All of these scan familiarly but quickly break down into non-sense, albeit a nonsense aligned with familiar syntax. DuCharme melts rhetorical structures, splicing anachronistic word choices into familiar descriptive and argumentative frames.

In FOOTNOTE TO SUDDEN we see:
shards
in bundles, slumping
to sputter, cruelly representative
Driven toward, in various incidents
what used to be viable (-torched-)
Much of what couldn't not be heard
or written in, brand-
New: I know ( 63)

If these poems have a motion it is streaming: water running off interlocking shingles, or rubble falling over armored plates. They resist, with the chilling effect of maintaining a political and argumentative air without-saying-shit. Oh, so relevant. These are the mechanisms of rhetoric itself, the function of argument in an era of surplus opinion, that we are forced to focus on.

Look at this poem that seems to be concerned, sort of, with the noises we make about the war we are in:
                                    an axis of the 'sneak' retaliate
in adversaries to have spawned
                  a 'homeland' & the threat-based
                  potential
they need a smaller version of a
                                    nuke-you-lure


                  friends attack friends sample
deterrent to a scrawl
                  in this wage while clanging
about the potential                   this
                                    cut-out spoils, this reeling

                  my judgment is that we should wander
                                    in torsion to the scrawl
toward minimum zero
                  nuke you leer
posture shifts in plummeting

                  allies with range               or
                  in them slowly
for offense;                   this new
                  -credible                   military                   potency
                  approach of the need
for nude-clear

Look at this poem about the noise we make about the noise the news makes about these things:
I Am Wolf Blitzen & This Is Dinner

It's a little bit weak but it
Levitates. It's not the same tomorrow,
Or next Tuesday. It
Is often the same
Thing as we. How do you
Arrange this. It
Or this. Some real fine trail
Going on here. Singing,
''Often, graceful esplanade''
While flared. It's True
Anachronism by shutting down
The output
...
(Please sign off)
In the future, there will be some trafficking.

Other poems turn away to address the question of reading and attention drift, as when we are told,
''Don't throw away this screwed up batch
Contingent like the subheadings
Under guns which could only be skewed
Conditions for a short hike'' (16)

The book is structured in three parts – Outside Matters, The Betweens, and The Matter Outside – and clustered in theme and sound in a complicated structure. News casters and current-events language buzzes throughout. The focal point rests just-distant – the space directly beyond the lyric subject, the language static surrounding an issue. Disjointed serial lists and obsessive redundancy contribute to a kind of idea-enjambment that distracts and scatters the readers attention. They seem to deploy an obnoxious political vaguery:
Hallmarks to my
Pre-sotted chortle
Fishsick gimmik random
Spooky
Vellum assignment
Nonintentionality voices

The stanza reads like an argument, but what does it argue? Rachel Levitsky's blurb describes this antagonism well: ''DuCharme seems to be about to define his project, but as you eagerly slide into a suggested narrowing, reader beware you are about to widen (yes you yourself) far before you hit the ground . . . ''

It is when the foggy technique addresses personal subject matter that the structures can be seen most clearly, growing within the constraints. In ''CREATURE, SORT OF HUMMING'' and the ''Deviant Winebagos'' poems, life detail made sparse and strange in its transformation to sound byte gives a dimension of panic to gesture within the natural.
Information twirling by
Rote, we can't
inform all the people
all
the time-- just twitter &
Adjust
Your long-
Range plans your escapisms
One other thing becomes transparent

''One other thing becomes transparent'' is a hilarious line that cuts cleanly – anything close to ''apparent'' in this book evaporates away before it hits the page, and these poems have me simultaneously frustrated and elated by their sequences of elision. I am indebted to the strange distance of DuCharme's language casting me out and directing me away. It’s certainly relevant at a time when such huge things are building themselves on similar gestures of avoidance.

*****

Denise Dooley lives in Rogers Park, Chicago. She writes poetry and fiction and works in science education outreach at Northwestern.

TWO BOOKS by FRANCIS PICABIA and GEORGE BAKER

JOHN HERBERT CUNNINGHAM Reviews

Caught By The Tail: Francis Picabia and Dada in Paris by George Baker
(MIT Press, 2007)

and

I Am A Beautiful Monster: Poetry, Prose and Provocations by Francis Picabia, translated by Marc Lowenthal
(MIT Press, 2007)

“’This portrait is about me,’ he claims, collapsing the genre of the portrait with a ‘mechanical object floating in an empty space without context, a stunning marriage of the impersonality of the drawing’s production to the lack of personality to which the portrait can now attest. But Picabia is not finished. ‘Le Saint des saints,’ he inscribes it: the saint of saints, the holy of holies, ‘this portrait is about me.’”(31)

And so opens chapter 1 of Caught By The Tail, one of two books released by MIT press on Francis Picabia, enfant terrible -- or, at least, one of them -- of the Dadaist movement. The first, Caught By The Tail, and the second, I Am A Beautiful Monster, demand to be read together as each touches on only one aspect of this master; the first on his non-poetic side and the second on the poetic. In addition, Caught By The Tail provides an overview of the Dadaist movement during its Paris years with such chapters bearing such subtitles as Dada Drawing, Dada Painting, Dada Photography, Dada Abstraction and Dada Cinema with an Epilogue bearing the title ‘Long Live Dada: A Dada Montage’ and, as such, should be read/discussed first.

But first, a bit of bio. Francis-Marie Martinez Picabia (January 22, 1879 - November 30, 1953) was born in Paris of a French mother and a Spanish-Cuban father. He studied at the École des Beaux-Arts and the École des Arts Decoratifs. The year 1911 proved pivotal for him for it was in that year that he became involved with the Puteaux Group which met at Jacques Villon’s studio in the village of Puteaux. There he became acquainted with Marcel Duchamp as well as several prominent Cubist artists and poets including Apollinaire, Albert Gleizes, Roger de La Fresnaye, Fernand Léger and Jean Metzinger. The introduction to Caught By The Tail concerns this period. In what has come to be characterized as his ‘proto-Dada’ period, from 1913 to 1915, he traveled to New York several times developing his portraits mécaniques. This led, in 1916, while he was in Barcelona, to his starting the Dada periodical 391, in which he published his first mechanical drawings. Around 1919, he became involved with Tristan Tzara at the Café Voltaire in Zurich moving back-and-forth between there and Paris. Shortly thereafter, he came under the sway of Surrealism abandoning Dada for it.

The Le saint des saints drawing referred to in the opening quotation was created in 1915. This formed part of his ‘portraits mécaniques’ and was created while Picabia was in New York. In 1920, Le saint des saints was exhibited in a one-man show in Paris “organized as part of the initial onslaught of Dada in Paris.”(33) As part of this onslaught, Picabia introduced in his publication, 391, another drawing, La Sainte-Vierge or The Blessed Virgin, consisting “of an accumulation of splashes, or better violent drippings of ink on a white sheet of paper…seem[ing] to have very little to do with Picabia’s earlier mechanomorphic images, given over as the latter are to the impersonal artistic language of mechanical drawing, and to the readymade condition of the copy…take[s] its place alongside a host of other Dada experiments with chance procedures, its technique every bit as impersonal -- as violent toward authorship -- as Picabia’s earlier appropriated images.”(33) This quote expresses one of the important ‘technical’ influences of Dada -- chance technique -- which would come to influence the art and writings of John Cage and the poetry of Jackson Mac Low as well as the New York School of John Ashbery and Frank O’hara. After discussing various interpretations of this ink smear by various art historians, Baker makes a very important artistic statement: “Art history seems to have forgotten that Dada was not entirely interested in discovering the meaning of works of art. Meaningless was its goal. Iconography, even ‘hidden’ or secret meanings, were surely invoked by many Dada works. But usually this was done in the spirit of travesty, a devastating annihilation of the apparatus of meaning that had always supported the traditional work of art. Perhaps the time had come for the deployment of another interpretative model. And indeed we could start with the simple suggestion that Picabia’s La Sainte-Vierge is not an image ‘of’ anything at all.”(39) This sentiment seems to have been in the air in other arts as it was around this time that Stravinsky, in a speech at Princeton University, declared music to be devoid of meaning. But Picabia didn’t stop there; from nothing, he created another nothing, as Baker continues, p. 40: “One could never pastiche La Sainte-Vierge, divorced from the hand of the artist and thus purges of any traces of what we might call ‘style,’ one could only follow Picabia’s procedure, producing other Saint-Vierge, itself inimitable in turn. Picabia would do this.” And thus -- La Saint-Vierge II (see p. 41) Thus, Dada came to Paris in 1920 in the form of drawing. Of this period, Baker says “I like to think of several moments of the 1920 Paris Dada season as defining its paradoxical ‘greatness’, as defining, that is, the coiled energies that fuelled Dada’s inevitable failure.”(56) -- one of these moments being the arrival of Tristan Tzara in Paris announced by a ‘reading of his poetry’ “in a popular cinema on the Rue St. Martin”(56) where arrangements had been made that, immediately upon Tzara beginning to read, André Breton and Louis Aragon, who had been waiting in the wings as prearranged, began ringing electric bells preventing anyone from hearing a single word. In concluding this chapter, Baker describes the accomplishments of the Paris Dada period as “meaning would be confronted with nonmeaning, life with death, and discourse with the immense void of silence. Such was the logic of the limit. As a word, as a signifier, ‘silence’ itself could be considered ‘sacrificial’.”(91) We have been shown how this applies to Picabia’s visual art. We will later examine whether this can be applied to his poetic art.

The year 1921 takes us to chapter 2 and to Dada Painting, it takes us to Picabia breaking away from the Paris Dada Group even as he evokes it using a collage technique to gather all the faces of the principals together -- but not their bodies; it’s as if he’s leaving the bodies behind, the faces soon to become the memories of those he once worked with and was inspired by -- and he’s doing this in the collage and photomontage he titled L’oeil cacodylate. Baker says of this:
Instead, L’oeil cacodylate was a collective work, a gesture that insisted on the group; but it was made just as Picabia ceded publicly from the Paris Dada group in the summer of 1921, becoming, in effect, the first and most important ‘dissident Dadaist.’ None of Dada’s central tactics, Picabia’s prior tactics, seems to prevail anymore in 1921: chance, readymade, diagram, mechanical drawing. Stylistic inconsistency rubs hands with medium incoherence, suspending the object between text, photographic and painting,. Seemingly, the work’s inconsistencies know no bounds.(97)

Prior to breaking away, Picabia, thinking that perhaps a live monkey would cause too much controversy, attended at a toy store to purchase a stuffed one and pasted it to a canvas calling it Nature mortes thereby inaugurating what would become know as Dada painting.
In Nature mortes, Picabia presents a readymade but, typically, insists on attaching the object to a canvas surface, forging an indissoluble link between the readymade and painting, a bond that somehow resists easy resolution into the category of collage, just as it does not quite enter the free standing object domain of sculpture (a step definitively taken by Duchamp’s readymades). Duchamp’s insistence that the readymade emerges only as the product of a collision between a chosen commodity object and, just as important, a verbal inscription -- their ‘rendezvous’ as he might have put it -- this was followed by Picabia.(sic) But Picabia’s readymade stubbornly clings to the domain of painting -- a domain whose certainties and conventions, however, now find themselves brutally eviscerated.(101)

After discussing the importance of this, as well as that of Tableau Dada II and Duchamp`s reproduction of the Mona Lisa, replicated this time with a moustache and goatee, Baker looks to the analogy between the visual and the written:
Learning from Natures mortes and L.H.O.O.Q., a Tableau Dada necessarily engaged the question of language -- but language turned against itself, the twisted language of the pun. It reconfigured the status of the mark -- of writing, of drawing -- as a form of the graffito, striking with violence against the proprieties of representation. It enacted a thematics of castration -- suggested, in the closely squeezed legs of Picabia`s monkey; denied, in the presence of Duchamp`s phallic Mother; and redoubled, in Picabia`s erasure of L.H.O.O.Q.`s facial goatee or tail.(109-11)

Baker then takes the reader through a discussion of Jean-Joseph Goux’s concept of general equivalents which Baker defines as “represent[ing] a standard measure – that object against which others are compared, making disparate things commensurable, rendering them in some sense equal, opening up the question of an ordered system of substitutions or exchange, and with that, the correlative question of value.”(111) Baker goes on to examine how this relates to Dada, then introduces the fact that money has been separated from the gold standard resulting in a crisis which “parallels a concurrent series of other representational crises: the contestation of realism in the novel, the relinquishment of figuration in painting, and Saussure’s momentous severing of linguistic signs from their referents in the real world.”(126) The result: “the disentwining of the functions of the general equivalent in modernity”(126) and resulting in the creation of the token. Finally, after a lengthy discussion lasting several pages, he arrives at the applicability of this analysis to Picabia and his work: “These words could have been written directly for Picabia, for the critique of painting that his Natures mortes conveys, or for the vast, repetitive system of parody and pastiche that his work would later enact. In the wake of Dada, Picabia’s lifelong dedication to the copy, his initiation of an aesthetic system of perpetual parodic acts, embraces the mimetic copy only in its absolute bankruptcy a bankruptcy in the face of the unrepresentable nature of the token sign, but also, one realizes, a bankruptcy on which the token sign will be founded.”(129) Later that same year, Picabia signed his name proclaiming that act to be itself a readymade. “Reduced in this way to language, the work of art assimilates itself to a function of the genral (sic) equivalent just as much as those Dada works that embraced the forms of monetary economy -- language being the general equivalent of signs as money is the general equivalent of products.”(139) Feigning an inability to paint due to an eye infection, Picabia refused to participate in the ‘Grande Saison Dada’ of 1921 -- perhaps because of the presence of the Surrealists Breton and Aragon who were just beginning to make their presence felt -- and, instead, invited a select group of friends to his apartment to view his paintings.

Photography has been a part of Dada since its inception. After all, during the period when Dada was in New York, Alfred Stieglitz’s studio was used as a gathering spot. But, in discussing Dada photography in his third chapter, Baker focuses primarily on the Dadaphoto as seen in the April 1921 publication New York Dada. While continuing with his theme of the connection between language and the visual arts, he begins to embellish on his discussion of Lacanian analysis which he had started briefly earlier. Rather than on Picabia, this chapter focuses on the relationship between the American dadaist Man Ray and Marcel Duchamp. Using the nude photo of Baroness Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven, he attempts to refute the charge that Dada was misogynistic although he is not altogether successful particularly when one of the photographs under discussion is Man Ray’s Portmanteau which features a nude model, masked and with one black stocking on standing behind a coat rack which divides her sex.

‘Prolem Sine Matre Creatam: Dada Abstraction’ returns us to Picabia proper examining various artworks including La Veuve Joyeuse (The Merry Widow) and Chapeau de Paille? (Straw Hat?), both from 1921. Baker describes this period: “And similarly, Picabia’s formerly ‘poetic’ verbal inscriptions become less a series of lines of flight than an assault and a graffiti once more, the open-ended ‘M…..’ calling up inevitably the Dadaists’ favorite exclamation: Merde. Shit for whomever looks at this! Or better: Fuck anyone who looks at this.”(208) Picabia’s move to abstraction signalled, in the eyes of the Picabia scholar Maria Lluisa Borràs, the end of Dada. The eve of this ending was signalled by Picabia travelling with Andre Breton to Barcelona in August 1922 for one of the most important Dada exhibitions, Baker characterizing it as “the Barcelona show was deeply representative of what Dada means…, part and parcel of a movement that was never more powerful than when it was in full flight, or when it was devolving into absolute disintegration. Dada was a complete success in just those moments when it could only be judged a total failure.”(214)

An important development in Picabia’s oeuvre, and for poetry in general, took place during the creation of the last of the mechanomorphs around 1922. “All of the last mechanomorphic titles, in fact, were seized on readymade from captions, taken directly from the explanatory labels affixed to photographs and diagrams in the magazine La Science et la Vie. They were readymade captions. But now, the images that they so clearly identified could not be seen as such. They were captions pinned hopelessly to abstractions, disassociated phrases attached to still potent enigmas whose source had now been flipped away from the verbal and into the operations of visual form itself.”(230)

Baker concludes this chapter with an examination of the drawings from late 1922 through 1924 where “the last mechanomorphs marry abstract form to the part object”(268) -- Optophone, Lampe which are “an embrace of the figurative-as-pastiche that soon left any concern with abstraction far behind.”(271) These incredible pieces “at their most bold…violated the neo-classical body of post-war French art with the hallucinogenic, pornographic intensity of a 1924 drawing such as Érotique, a vision worthy of Bosch, with the stark bodily contour of a renewed figurative line doing nothing to stem the tide of transformations initiated by the part object to which this line nevertheless attempts to give form, and from which it takes the modality of its form.”(271)

A short way into the chapter ‘Intermission: Dada Cinema’, the ‘intermission part assumed from the film made by Picabia, Eric Satie and René Clair in 1924 titled Entr’acte, Baker states that “Dada’s origins lie in an engagement with performance and theatre, from the moment that the first Dadaists coalesced in 1916 at the Cabaret Voltaire in Switzerland. Paris Dada, in its own way, intensified this theatrical origin.”(292) Baker, in this chapter, concentrates on descriptions of the film which he does exceedingly well including various stills to emphasize his points. The film has numerous reversals with “shots that are simply ordered backward in relation to a standard pattern of narrative ending.”(315) The “crucial lesson to be learned”, he says, is that by “simply reversing standard shot order, meaning is not merely sapped or voided. A whole new series of connections comes into play, connections usually repressed by narrative causality.” He elaborates on these connections on p. 318: “Yes, an order of representation here is targeted; and yes, its annihilation proceeds as if from within, via the upending and sheer reversal of that order’s conventional symbolic structures. However, in this upending, the cuts between scenes in Entr’acte may at first not appear ’logical’ or motivated by the conventions of storytelling, but they weave a vast tapestry of interconnections nonetheless, a series of exchanges and comparisons whose overall effect is one of a general symbolic contagion.” Baker cites Walter Benjamin’s response to Dada cinema as well as to Picabia’s poetry, Benjamin calling Picabia an “artist of correspondences” and, as a result thereof, Baker states, at p. 320-21, that:
The Symbolist heritage of the ‘correspondences’ survives in Picabia’s work, no matter art history’s long insistence that Symbolist aesthetics were precisely targeted by Dada as an avant-garde, like the perfume of so many vibrant flowers falling before the aggressive petrol stench of the machine. But instead of seeing this heritage liquidated in the moment of Dada as an avant-garde, one might suggest that ideas such as ‘correspondence’ were only radicalized by artists like Picabia – transformed beyond recognition, but not relinquished.

And so Baker, following Dada Cinema, prepares to silence himself. But in the process of speaking, he has said a great deal leaving us with a much better understanding of Dada and Francis Picabia. The discussions he has had throughout regarding the connections between Picabia’s language and his art have prepared us for Lowenthal’s translation. And so he passes on the torch so Lowenthal can speak.

And speak Lowenthal does. He begins his ‘Translator’s Introduction’ with the following:
The Dada movement has been framed and assessed in numerous ways: as the groundwork to abstract art and sound poetry, a starting point for performance art, a prelude to postmodernism, an influence on pop art, a celebration of antiart to be later embraced for anarcho-political uses in the 1960s, as well as -- perhaps its most common summation -- the movement that lay the foundation for Surrealism. However one wishes to use Dada, though, its one overriding significance for the twentieth century, and its one attribute that continues to cast a formidable shadow into the twenty-first, is the way it managed to, however briefly, embody an attitude…What the unconscious was to Surrealism, refusal was to Dada; and that this nihilistic spirit remains potent (and emulated) to this day is in no small part due to the contribution of Francis Picabia. A self-declared funny guy, failure, alcoholic imbecile, and pickpocket (not to mention painter and poet), Picabia was above all a most ‘beautiful monster’, who for a significant period of time during the heady years of early modernism was able to rightly claim the distinction of being the anti-artist par excellence.(1)

This introduction is excellent providing one with a vivid, although succinct, portrayal of Picabia and the world of Dada. For example, he describes, at p. 10, the connection between Picabia’s painting [as an aside, Lowenthal informs us that Picabia began as a post-impressionist landscape painter who eschewed modernity] and his poetry: “Whether because of his frequent and doubtless wearisome journeys by boat, his troubled first marriage and reluctant solitude in New York, or his nervous depression and recuperation from opium addiction in Switzerland (where a doctor actually forbade his to paint), Picabia’s early poetry arose from an absence of painting, which, despite his frequent antagonism toward the art world, was ultimately his real refuge and for him a truer source of pleasure.” What sets Picabia apart from such other Dada poets as Kurt Schwitters or Hugo Ball is that “Picabia’s literary abstraction operates on the level of syntax and sense, bur rarely on the level of the word and sound itself, and the few exceptions were more for the sake of satire than experimentation.”(13)

Upon arriving at the poetry, there are two things one immediately notices. The first is that Lowenthal provides excellent introductions to the poems. For example, in setting out ‘Delightful’, he precedes it with an intro which provides a picture of Picabia’s life in New York: “Gabrielle Buffet [Picabia’s first wife] was in Switzerland with their children. Picabia was sharing a New York apartment with Edgard Varèse [the composer of Amériques in which he used one of the first electronic instruments, the ondes Martenot, and Ecuatorial in which he used the Theremin], and having an affair with Isadora Duncan [the originator of Contemporary Dance].”(28) We see the influence of Mallarmé in the way the poem is set out on the page:
                  Being both
                                    disconnected
from day                   to day
              more alone than anywhere
                  to sometimes bring to an end
                                    the tip of my nose

in my authentic
                                    life
if it’s possible
                  I am sure
                                material necessity
                                    brings good luck

We can see Picabia’s anti-art perspective in the last line of the first stanza ‘the tip of my nose’ throwing in the unexpected and unusual which wrenches the lyricism that preceded it to a grinding halt -- something fitting for his mechanomorphic attitude. The poem combines both the aural and the visual which is fitting for an artist both visual and poetic. Note how ‘life’ hangs as if that aspect, perhaps his life as a post-impressionist landscape painter, has been ejected or, perhaps, has committed suicide so that the ‘real’ life of Picabia can emerge. The second thing to be noticed is that there is no French counterpart which is something every translation should have. However, considering that this book is already over 400 pages in length, this is, perhaps, understandable.

Picabia’s first book, ‘Fifty-Two Mirrors’, was published in Barcelona in 1917. There are a few poems which combine the aural and the visual but, for the most part, a straight lyric structure is present. Take ‘Basin’: “Crossed out in a little courtyard/of twisted cable./Wisteria in the pansy joy./The pattern and its dance/marks the duration between the curtains.” Present is the convoluted syntax ‘Wisteria in the pansy joy’, the displaced word ‘duration between the curtains’, the shock and awe of unrelated images piled one atop the other creating a disorientation all aligned at the left hand margin. We miss the joyful exuberance of space, the dance of words across, along and down the page.

This, as well as several other, poems reflect an interesting aspect of Dadaist poetry -- an aspect which Lowenthal never mentions. To understand this, we must go back to Charles Baudelaire, the father of French modernism, and, more particularly, to his poem ‘Correspondances’ (Correspondences) with its line “Les parfums, les coloeurs et les sons se répondent.” which C.F. McIntyre, at p. 13 of his French Symbolist Poetry, translated as “perfumes, sounds, and colors correspond.” This is the essence of what came to be known as Symbolism. Poetry Portal (http://www.poetry-portal.com/poets39.html) says of this that “Baudelaire's poetry explored symbols selected for their tendency to evoke one sensory experience through another, so elevating experience to the level of intellect.” It says of another Symbolist poet, Mallarmé, that he “populated a universe with symbols lacking obvious referents.” We can see the transition of this symbolic correspondence from Baudelaire through Mallarmé to Picabia; from symbols that have reference to symbols that lack the obvious to symbols that themselves are corrupted but have reference although to things which lack any conceivable correspondence other than that they have been juxtaposed together merely as a result of language -- correspondence of the ludicrous. And it is this which gives Dadaist poetry its disorienting effect. How else do we explain this line in ‘Basin’: “Animals encounter the solitude of screws/at the arabesque hour in the keys.”(35) Or the example of ‘Somersaults’:
            Dislocation of the still water
                  Beans
                  Opium
                  Explosion
            The signal of flutes comes
                  At my feet.
Crooked in the fold of its hieroglyph
                  Pregnant
                  Damaged
                  House(46)

We can see where John Ashbery in part derived from.

Further development is readily seen in Picabia’s next book Poems and Drawings of the Daughter Born Without A Mother (Prolem sine matrem creatam), published in Lausanne, Switzerland in 1918, whose title was apparently derived from Ovid’s second Metamorphosis via the Petit Larousse dictionary which Picabia tended to have with him at all times. Some of his poems, such as the second stanza of ‘Belladonna’, give the appearance that he would randomly select words from that source: “Gladiator pickpockets/tedded by the dancers of a terrifying dream/nightmares in the red ring naturally/we chose the simple sensualities/of flabby clowns flagellated in the sky/where iron soothes the dangerous place/I myself tremble from the sparkling reflections”(71). Or this from ‘The Maid’: “If only the arrogant shoes/understood the amethysts/with the feathers of living rabbits.”(81) Included amongst the poems are eighteen of Picabia’s mechanomorphs. Also included is the poem ‘Cacodylat’ whose opening stanza reads: “Her parade whose turmoil has ruthless milestones/led a procession of a bright pink cacodylate eye/through my life of Swiss overeating./The reclining chairs were to be found after death/which they clearly though covers abandonment/all that in a bit of crystal doctor –“(79).

In late 1918, Picabia published two chapbooks -- The Mortician’s Athlete, subtitled Poem in five cantos, and Platonic False Teeth, subtitled Poem in two chapters: Pharmacist of chance. Both were published in Switzerland. In the first, his longest poem to date, he titles each canto: Canto I: salt water, Canto II: forkscrews, Canto III: coconut, Canto IV: gingerbread, and Canto V: houses of cards. Lowenthal cites P.A. Benoit’s statement that “Picabia had taken a mass of the poems he had been writing since The Daughter Born without a Mother…removed their titles, and joined them together to compose this poem.”(98) Canto I opens with “The palm tree of flooded wives/turns towards me the prodigy road/of coffeeless thorn bushes, which sing/of liquid bracelets.”(99) This is again an enhancement of what has gone before. While he had used the prose poem format in an earlier poem ‘Ideal Gilded By Gold’, found in his first book, Platonic False Teeth is written entirely in that style. The ‘First Chapter’, subtitled ‘Foulbrood’, begins:
The regime of the photographic radium screen’s wind rests every day in the effluvia of the sublime family of great vices when the pyre laughs at the pirate world. Blushing gets pretty dangerous if paralyzed King lacks a Queen, and Jesus Christ, crazed with the sorrows of a society violated in public hereditary silence, operates early in the intrigues of the seraglio, vizier of heaven’s administration.”(112)

During the course of the poem, Picabia takes liberties with himself: “Francis Picabia, I’m understanding you less and less.”(115) Then, after an intervening paragraph: “I’m beginning to understand you, dear friend!” -- this hucksterism becoming an enduring -- and endearing -- aspect of his poetry from this point on. I cannot help but hear the echo of Shakespeare’s Mark Antony in the opening line of Chapter II: The Towel Rail Amazon: “The crime that a man commits becomes a pleasure in his ears”(116).

The rest of the Pre-Dada poetic period, 1917-19, is completed with a few loose published poems plus Purring Poetry, consisting of one long poem published in Lausanne in 1919 which contains the first instance of the word ‘Dada’ appearing in one of Picabia’s poems.

The Dada period proper begins with what appears to be one long poem, Thoughts Without Language, published in Paris in 1919 -- the first Dadaist poem to be published there. The poems which appear to make up this one long poem lack titles leading to confusion as to where one ends and the next begins although, in the original edition, each poem appeared on a separate page. Lowenthal comments that “Obviously, Picabia is using language (and his concluding note should dissuade the reader from concluding that these points are language without thought); but rather than reproducing through and within the framework of language, the title points to an effort at reversing this conventional process by reproducing language through the framework of thought; an inversion not unlike Picabia’s later allusions to a ‘frame without a picture.’ It is striking, then, to see how Picabia has arrived at an idea of automatic writing and unconscious language similar to that of Breton’s, but through his own approach: one derived from Nietzsche rather than psychoanalysis and Freud.”(150) This is the last half of the first stanza:
love talk
which is not a military service
I already see the little cross
fitted out with a ribbon smoking a cigarette
over the ruins(153)

The note referred to appears as a P.S. at the end and reads: “To all those itching to say that this language is without thought, I recommend a dangerous visit to the zoological gardens.”(177) Enigmatic, non! Enigmatic, yes!

We come now to one of Picabia’s most famous works -- the Unique Eunuch, published in Paris in 1920. As Lowenthal states, at p. 182: “This book is considered by many to be the summation of Picabia’s early poetry, and one of the more emblematic productions of Paris Dada. Its most immediately noticeable feature is the fact that a good number of verses run backward, evidence of the poet’s continued interest in the idea of isotropic poetry, but also a liberalization of the wordplay between vers and envers (‘reversed verse’, so to speak).” as can be seen here: “Ancient lit trimming black/Bicycle horizon the toward/Etiquette breast the in/Raven a with pregnant is/The League of Nations/Camel a or/With D’Annunzio’s nightmarish spices”(184)

Lowenthal describes Picabia’s next poetry book, Jesus Christ Rastaquouère, published in Paris in 1920, as “Picabia’s most accomplished literary work…Although this book has come to be considered one of the credos of the Parisian Dada movement, its opening ‘interlude’ already demonstrates a distancing between Picabia and the Dadaists.”(223) The interlude describes a trip on a ship where all the passengers are on horseback except for Picabia who is on a wooden horse: “We disembarked at a new land where horses were unknown; the natives took our ship’s mounted passengers for two-headed animals and didn’t dare approach, consumed with terror; only I, recognized as a fellow human being by these primitive people, was taken prisoner.”(225) Here, prose and verse are intermingled, each being given equal billing:
Lyrical poets, dramatic poets, you worship art to escape from literature, and you are nothing but literary hacks. Struggling painters, the regions you explore are old anecdotes. Musicians, you are pebbles skipping on water…

            A man these days
            Is a kind of mirror
            When the curtain rises,
            The audience member’s seat
            Is completely free,
            He has no faith
            And you impose prejudices on him,
            How canon have hope?(226)

Divided into seven chapters, each heavily subdivided by subtitles, this is a Dadaist version of Gertrude Stein’s Tender Buttons which was published some seven years previous. Interesting -- one of the most profound Cubist literary works has found itself transformed into one of Dada’s most profound, the two antagonistic to each other -- or, so Picabia has led us to believe. There is a passage in chapter V that is a new direction in Picabia’s poetry but reminds one of the sound poetry of two other Dadaists -- Kurt Schwitters or Hugo Ball:
‘i
‘Ka tangi té Kivi
‘Ki vi
‘Ka Tangi té moho
‘hi hi e
‘pi pi e
‘ta ta e
‘ta kou ta ka jou (245)

Which Lowenthal, in his extensive notes to the poems, quotes Tristan Tzara as saying that this “is an abstract poem, ‘composed of pure sounds invented by myself and containing no allusion to reality’”(460) although it appears that “in a different form and in its original context, it is from a Maori work song for hauling trees.”

The end of Dada, at least for Picabia, was announced in 1921 with a flurry of aphorisms, prose and manifestoes.

The period following Picabia’s renunciation of Dada was marked by individual prose and poetry published in small presses approaching the vitriolic. It was not until 1939 (published some sixteen years later in 1955) that he wrote another book of poems, Poems of Dingalari. Of this, Lowenthal says: “Picabia began to write poetry again, but in a very different manner from his earlier years: sarcasm had given way to melancholy lyricism.”(346): “I need air to breathe/before me Switzerland with its sunken eye sockets/looks at me/I hear the word war uttered/the ground is soft/I feel like I’ve fallen/and it won’t be possible to stand back up”(347). Granted there is a war on, but this is a poetry of regret. Picabia’s moment has passed and he is aware of it. “I am rid of my youth/rid of its unbearable oppression/all that remains to me/is hashish/women now/are delightful pianos”(353). As is evidenced here, he is still capable of coining an intriguing metaphor. But this is not the Picabia that brought us Dada, which violated all of the strictures and, in doing so, challenged those that followed to see things in a new way, to write in a new way.

This is not to say that there are not some interesting moments nor that Picabia ceased being creative. In some of his later work, he quotes, without stating the source, from Nietzsche’s The Gay Science. This is spoken of derisively by Lowenthal. And it would probably be so by any writer. Except -- and this is a very important exception -- Picabia’s poetry oftentimes mirrored developments in his painting. Is it not possible, then, that he considers the words of Nietzsche splayed out in a book as found objects, as readymades to be used as he desires without the need for attribution? After all, did Duchamp attribute the urinal he turned without modification into art to the manufacturer? Then why should it be done for words other than that there is an antique convention respecting that? Conventions of any sort were not respected by the Dadaists.

MIT Press, George Baker and Marc Lowenthal must be showered with accolades for bringing out these two excellent books that, together, reveal one of the most interesting of poets/painters/writers/funny guys of the twentieth century -- one that has had a profound influence on what came after. Literature would be profoundly different today were it not for Picabia and Dada.

*****

John Cunningham is a poet and writer from Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada, Every once in a while he emerges from his igloo, hitches up his dog sled team, and sets off across the white expanse of emptiness known as Canada in order to write poetry reviews. He does o in Canada for Malahat Review, Prairie Fire, Arc, Antigonish Review and Fiddlehead, in the U.S. for Big Bridge, Galatea Resurrects, Rain Taxi, Rattle and Quarterly Conversations, and in Australia for Jacket.

DEMENTIA BLOG by SUSAN M. SCHULTZ

EILEEN TABIOS Engages

DEMENTIA BLOG by Susan M. Schultz
(Singing Horse Press, San Diego, CA, 2008)

Susan M. Schultz’s Dementia Blog is uncomfortably moving, and successful on its own terms and ultimately on mine as a poetry reader. Among such terms is how the project’s book form illustrates how blogging can be generative for creative writing, as well as how the subsequent book form becomes more than just a hard copy print-out of a blog. But, first, Schultz’s “A Fore and After Word” offers a convenient description of the project so let me post (pun intended of course) it here:
I kept a travel blog over the summer of 2006 for family and friends. We did this and we did that filled up the month of July, when we were (as they say) “abroad.” As August began, we arrived in Northern Virginia, where my mother lives. She was still at home then, but lived there with difficulty, as her dementia had progressed (if progress it was) until she could not care for herself, but refused to (could not) admit that fact. The blog turned serious and became a prose poetic project. Dementia destroys the self, but that destruction is oddly, horribly, poetic. My mother was crossing paths with my children (5 and 7), who were developing maturity and independence even as she was losing it. But the processes were not utterly dissimilar, those of loss and gain. So I began to record what I saw. What had seemed awkward about the blog, the way in which it’s written forward but read backwards, suddenly made sense as a form in which to work on the process of memory and forgetting. Whatever is confusing about reading the story backwards is intended by the form. The confusions offered by the form are similar (or at least apt metaphors) to the confusions of dementia.

There is also a political content to this blog. During the time it was written, the Bush administration was pushing us closer to the abyss. The administration’s uses of the language seemed, to this reader, demented. The split between reader and author, between the person who suffers (or causes to suffer) and the person who reads about it, forms a significant part of my “plot.”

I dedicate this blog to my mother’s many friends, to my family and to everyone for whom dementia is a family and/or national event. Their losses of memory cause us to lose our loved ones; our loss of memory may cause us to lose our nation.

The project may have begun as a journal but poetry clearly took over the words—it’s easy to see that Schultz didn’t need to embellish observations to nonetheless come up with resonant results like this below, where the first “She” refers to Schultz’s mother and “Sangha” to her son:
She was as surprised to see us on the second day as on the first. Knowledge is the memory you’ve done this at least once before. Sangha sings: Har-ry Pot-ter’s com-ing to town!

Not mentioned—that is, cited as part of the author’s intention—in the Fore/After Word is an ars poetica layer that deepens the meanings in—possibilities of—language:
Poetry is the language that calls attention to itself. Our sight words for today are

            Home

            broken

            meaning

            Box

            making

            checks

Of course, Dementia Blog inevitably includes memories since living inevitably evokes the past. But the almost matter-of-fact telling suffices for lingering effect:
The boy (was he 10, 12?) attached himself to me at Bal Mandir. He smiled, he followed. He was like a cat that rubs you as if to say “I’m not feral.” We toured the orphanage, met the women who cared for the children, gave them combs and lotions. They smiled, and we. The boy held to me, without touching, walked the corridors with me. Then he was gone. I turned toward a room packed with babies, and we were gone, out the front door of a cold former palace. In the car I wept. What’s the matter? Ramesh asked Bryant. By the waters of.

The juxtaposition of the political with the personal is uniquely effective—using dementia as a doorway into addressing the dysfunctional politics of the several years pre-Obama is one of those ideas that makes you (or me) think, “I wish I thought of that!” Except that here—and it’s one of the reasons Dementia Blog is so powerful—the concept isn’t an imagined idea, but one that arose organically from actual experience. (Not to say that imagination can't be powerfully generative, although when it is I think it's when what started out as imagined may become felt as lived.) This post fully replicated below is one of the most powerful in presenting dissonances and dissolutions as one loses one’s mind, as one witnesses a beloved mother lose her mind, as a country reels from war, and as one remembers, too, the illogical world often inhabited by orphans (Schultz’s children are adopted):
Thursday, December 07, 2006

--She says my life sounds fragmentary. I say fragments must be set down to see where their edges meet. He says he “throws his eye” at the books I sent. I say in English we do not throw our eyes, we cast them. Whiz of the line, kerplunk. Your glance is a hooked fish; you will draw him back in. He and you will drown in fullest air.

--They wrote of seams, of writing as a rough sewing. Canvas or skin, brush stroke scar.

--Sangha asks how to spell “broomstick.” He speaks of walking through magic walls, writes that Harry loves “Hermione,” that he wants to walk to the “castle,” that he feels how little boys feel who have “magic” powers. The “cupboard” was his orphanage.

--Use the word “and” to mean as many things as it can, then move on to “or.”

--Operation Forward Together. Operation Desert Storm. Operation Just Cause. Operation Enduring Freedom. And in my theater: Operation (Cult of) Overwork, Operation Disseminated Gossip, Operation Betrayal Guesswork, Operation Control Freak, Operation Drama Queen/King.

--Emma calls to say mom has pneumonia in her lower left lung.

--Radhika makes her own connect-the-dots pictures. Which come first, lines or dots? In a desert country, there are dots for cities, very few river lines. Anbar Province: 11 Americans killed yesterday by IEDs that can pierce a tank’s skin. This is an elephant! And this discarded metal. Open it up and see all the people.


II.

--To avoid fragments, join together mother’s pneumonia with the IEDs in Anbar with the operations that leave orphans in cupboards with the boy who would fly from them on his broomstick with the fish who makes his progress back to sea, away from the rod and line, line that leads us to the page-end, ragged edge where we find (this other morning exercise) haole privilege on-line with the metaphor of the back-of-the-bus turned on its head, where the haole sits at the back and forward together those who are not haole assume the front seat position in this geometry. I have heard those words in those subject/object positions, yes, but what of other sentences, those that refuse closure, open to offer me a middle seat? I will not let go this contested beauty. For each sentence admit the possibility of another, and another. If you are the guilty settler of one sentence, change your noun and verb. The adjectives will follow.

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I was also taken by the above post because I thought that the entirety of Part II, while a good rounding up of the fragments in Part I, also can work on its own. And that Part I’s fragments are also raw material for what became Part II is actually a good poem-in-progress exercise. That is, if Part II is to be taken as effective on its own, then the parts of Part I can be viewed as source-material. Perhaps I belabor this point admiringly because my very first published book, Black Lightning, was a compilation of poem-in-progress pieces on the poems of 14 poets. But anyway, let this paragraph attest to the multiplicities of readings possible for various parts of Dementia Blog.

As well, at the end of each blog post is a typical line replicated from the blog format, i.e.
“posted by Susan at 7:58 PM 0 comments”

I found myself quite moved here by the reference to “0 comments”. In a 134-page book of blog posts (mostly 1- to 2-page long), most of the posts end with “0 comments.” This is a project where one learns and feels, even empathizes. But often, one doesn’t “comment.” It’s not, or not just, because words sometimes fail. It’s that when it comes to the senseless, politically or personally, it’s insane to engage through conversation—there may be no one listening on the other side, or whoever might be listening may be a dubious presence.

Also effective is the occasional insertion of the blog format’s presenting of a listing of most recent posts. For example, below also works a poem: it could be entitled “Dementia”
November 19, 2006 Nothing left except loss of ...
November 12, 2006 -- What I do not say to her: th...
November 11, 2006 -- Houses are square, with pitc...
October 15, 2006 -- No Imperial Mints in Chiswic...
September 30, 2006 -- The lyric in wartime. If...
September 25, 2006 -- The former President lost h...
September 22, 2006 -- The words bear weight, bu...

Let me end with another excerpt—the ending to a post dated Aug. 14, 2006—which may also capture the sense of a closed world that dementia creates:
No leader of the Khmer Rouge has faced a court of law.

--Email from Karen: Mom slept.

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The front cover of the book presents a photo of Schultz’s parents. The back cover features that same photograph amidst a larger collage of family photos. The text between the covers fully justify why, on the back cover, the photograph is upside-down. Which is to say, in this book, Susan M. Schultz the poet is writing at the top of her game.

*****

Eileen Tabios does not allow her books to be reviewed in Galatea Resurrects, but she is pleased to point you elsewhere to Fred Muratori's review of her I Take Thee, English, For My Beloved in AMERICAN BOOK REVIEW. She feels lucky to have received reviews of her books and, one day, while wondering what to do with all these reviews, answered her own question with her newest book THE BLIND CHATELAINE'S KEYS: HER BIOGRAPHY THROUGH YOUR POETICS which recycles reviews and engagements of her poems into a biography--a biography because, as Ted Berrigan once noted, "there is a self inside almost all of the poems”.

THIS IS WHY I HURT YOU by KATE GREENSTREET

PAMELA HART Reviews

This is Why I Hurt You by Kate Greenstreet
(Lamehouse Press, Saginaw & Brooklyn, 2008)

The spaces between dreamtime and waking, between associative thought and logic are enigmatic and numinous. Questions reside there. And these questions may not often lurch towards answers. Kate Greenstreet’s chapbook, This is Why I Hurt You, roams in this territory.

It’s a spare book, with small poems that work like messages from some unknown place. As they move into the reader’s imagination, these epigrammatic pieces create puzzles to muse on. Like Zen koans, these are meant to be pondered by the reader, not necessarily solved. Photographer and writer Walker Evans’ words serve as a kind of guiding principle: “It’s logical to say that what I do is an act of faith. It came to me. And I worked it out.” Greenstreet’s poems ask us to “work it out,” make your own story or meaning. Or not.

The book ruminates on the purpose of art, particularly poetry. It opens with a short dialogue on the uses of poetry. You can’t stop a tank with a poem, someone once said. Still, Williams’ admonition about what could happen from a lack of poetry isn’t the point either. Poetry is about connectivity, according to Greenstreet. It helps us “to feel human. And to feel that being human is…an okay thing.” Perhaps in complicated times, this is more than enough.

As they move into dream territory, the poems become less tangible. Some wind through a strange narrative about an encounter with a wounded deer. These dream poems are occasionally interspersed with short, disjunctive sentences, some of which originated at Greenstreet’s blog. Somehow this all works—the way dreams make sense and you accept them. Here’s an example:
The picture should be looked at.

In the dream it’s you and me and a lot of other
people. We’re performing a long and complicated
vocal piece and I love you in the dream.

I think it lasts about…twenty minutes, then they
have to use the hack saws. To get it off. Can we
recognize a pattern?

I love the turn in the third stanza, especially the image of the hacksaw in the middle of a choral performance. There’s a wonderful, dark quirkiness to these poems and this book. And somehow I doubt Greenstreet’s last line, “These are all the questions I have.” I think she’s imagining more questions even now.

*****

Pamela Hart, a former journalist, is writer in residence at the Katonah Museum of Art. Her chapbook, The End of the Body, was published in 2006 by toadlily press. Her work has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize and has been published in journals like Kalliope, Rattappalax, and Lumina, and online at The Cortland Review, qarrtsiluni and postalpoetry.

A WOMAN'S GUIDE TO MOUNTAIN CLIMBING by JANE AUGUSTINE

JON CURLEY Reviews

A Woman’s Guide to Mountain Climbing by Jane Augustine
(Marsh Hawk Press, New York, 2008)

In poetry as well as other writing forms advancing autobiographical and memoir-oriented approaches, the tendency, the temptation, of falsifying self-analysis prevails. Absorption in life experience can lead to representations of posturing, a forensics of the self too aggrandizing or abasing to be taken seriously. This kind of practiced or inadvertent confessionalism is the mortal sin of an ego too convinced of its worth, a naked or well-clothed exposure meant to titillate with its variety of recollections and re-visitations of fatuous “life journeys” embroidered with the none-too-cautious didacticism of one who has really lived. For the most part, poetry of this ilk makes the transparent eyeball of the “I” in dire need of corrective lenses and so too leaves the careful reader wishing that Eliot’s dictum to run away from the personal be a mantra and a marathon—run, do not walk, from one’s hyperbolic sense of self importance, cover the veneer of your identity politics with a plastic covering to rescue you from an imbalanced consideration of your experiential worth. In other words, put that lustrous self of yours on the shelf with the other exemplars of self and see how the entire aggregate leaves nothing but voices arranged in a symphony of banal attitudes, conventional wisdoms, and witlessness.

The ability to truly write about oneself is difficult, as hard and implacable as the mountains Jane Augustine climbs and contends with through this magnificent volume, A Woman’s Guide to Mountain Climbing. With the precision of an eye glancing over a precipice and the honest, rigorous examination that comes with not only experience but poetic prowess, Augustine has chiseled a book that is a celebration of being in all of its conflicts, contradictions, joys, and losses. This kind of poetry is fully formed and like a rock. Instead of the sedimentary rock of superficial or residual recognitions, we have the igneous depths of revelation and befuddlement. What comes forth is a conscience laying down the weight of its memory and meaning while lashing it to the self-questioning that affirms both the understanding of a moment’s experience and the dire difficulties of comprehending the range—mountain metaphor is impossible to get away from—of emotions one should feel or face in the trajectory of living and moving across the face of one’s life.

I assume that some readers and critics would deem Augustine’s brand of poetry in service to some notion of a feminist poetics. Perhaps. But the gestation of these poems collectively force one to see their energies amassed from a feminizing poetic, taking the realm of the real into a becoming, affirming the feminine while kinetically discovering what this can and cannot be. The clarity and hard earned gestures performed here leave one with the idea that the process, not the result, characterizes the truly authentic endeavor to uncover one’s relation to the self and one’s surroundings, whether the natural world or the congested, often incommunicative world of social beings and their armament of agencies, desires, evasions, and deliberations.

In the title poem, “A Women’s Guide to Mountain Climbing,” the prescriptions start straightforwardly enough:
A woman can carry
on her back
everything needed to survive—

                  tent, sweater, sleeping bag
                  canteen, flyrod, cheese
                  cookpot, poncho, map
                  tampons, bowie knife
                  and book of stars

can’t climb
without these essentials

almost can’t climb
with them

But soon, with a careful and constant mindfulness that bespeak a sensitivity so lacking in most types of modern poetry, Augustine articulates a woman’s role and rhythm and then assays a reconciliation of materiality and myth, collapsing the ardent desire for fostering difference and unlikeness into the fusion of the human, the worldly and the unworldly. So the poem asserts:
A woman often carries more
than her own weight—
the child’s too

in the pit of her stomach
and balanced heavily upon
her watchful head: a long safari—

and think of those men who carry none
of their own weight,
who float asleep on the inner springs

of their mothers’ curls,
whose bathtubs’ crows-feet
are their secretaries’ hands and knees

—and likewise asserted is the quickening pulse of what it is, how it feels, to be a woman, a mother, a person witnessing the abjection forced by the unequal, unfair condition of women in the shadow of, no, not patriarchy—the sentiment is not writ so large—but the insensitive, casual deportment of male counterparts. Later on in the poem, the merging of the individual voice and a world made less obstructed by categorical separation of spirit and substance, myth and material, emotion and instinct comes to light:
I walk into the moon’s country.
Her fullness rises,
a cooled and softened sun.

Both eyes of the sky
have cleared, strip
down to essential body,

lose the flesh of thought.
My white bones float
out to meet that naked source

by which I see both dark and light,
wildflower both beautiful
and lethal—

                  no illusion

therefore no consolation

Notice how this passage refuses a period, as if to indicate that the lines run to no assertion, only a concentrated attunement to the magic and menace of experience imaginatively and personally processed. The “flesh of thought”—a phrasing so penetrating in its syncretic oversight of the collision of the material and abstract leads to the clear-headed conception of the available currents of perception allowed to the poet on a “safari” in the world—validation and a stark and troubled resignation. These lines run with the integrity of a mountain river and refuse the easy tributary into the human-made reservoir of easy closure.

These personal poems personalize themselves without exhibitionism, with a steady, surmounting projection of a self steeled in skeptical inquiry and roving jouissance with all that is on—and perhaps off, at least empirically—offer. Images and indications of familial and romantic loss and recuperation, the anxiety of being ensconsed and constrained by the limits of society and self-knowledge, the enumeration of the dependencies on family, social or poetic traditions, and cultivated sensibility of one’s notions of how to navigate the mountainous terrain of life’s fertile and sometimes frustratingly fallow or faltering portions: these qualities are, at times, countered, and held accountable, by the willful exemptions of a poet who refuses the tyranny of the real, the received, and the fateful. Few poets can bequeath a book that operates, on its own terms, as a guide, a user’s manual, that so poignantly instructs and points to paths of inquiry too often obscured by the brambles and brush of our noisy world, our lackluster selves. Jane Augustine is that kind of masterful poet that trailblazes and yet carries a torch to show the necessary trails to poets, readers, all of us in the dark and wishing for some illuminating filaments of grace to banish the encroaching darkness.

*****

Jon Curley is a poet living in Newark, New Jersey.

MENTAL COMMITMENT ROBOTS by SUEYEUN JULIETTE LEE

KAREN AN-HWEI LEE Reviews

Mental Commitment Robots by Sueyeun Juliette Lee and collages by Brenda Iijima
(Portable Press at Yo-Yo Labs, Brooklyn, 2007)

With a startling ivory and fuchsia cardstock cover, this new chapbook by Sueyeun Juliette Lee is a cerebral medley of prose poems and images. Fresh from Portable Press at Yo-Yo Labs in Brooklyn, New York, Mental Commitment Robots includes collages by publisher Brenda Iijima, whose editorial vision for “diversity and interconnection—social, cultural, environmental and aesthetic” characterize her fine saddle-stitched series. Iijima’s cover is a collage of light microscopy images (protozoa and neurons), a nomenclature index, graph paper, and ink-on-text designs reminiscent of British artist Tom Phillips’s The Humument. The back cover is a pastiche of oil rigs, algae, a dog, a fish, furniture, a plant, and a little robot drawn on a cut-out index. The overall effect is eclectic, brainy, and stylish: The last page reveals a hammerhead shark, a hand-drawn eye, and another little text robot.

Lee (no relation to me, by the way, except in poetic sisterhood) sings rhapsodic, fractured inscapes across a scientific spectrum of musical rhythms, subterranean noise, and marine transparencies. The first prose poem sequence, “Once more,” is innocently surreal and capricious: “. . . The bus is an aqueduct, a portal for song. I can cry no more sorry anemones when I hear a violin . . . .” The lyric moment is continually deferred -- in playful humoresques -- by the pragmatic or empirical. Although the poems occasionally sing of dramas, sentimentalism never takes root. In fact, the tension between our material world and a rich inner life -- albeit one that questions authentic presences -- results in a phenomenology of emotion pixilated by the technology of simulation, the ceaseless production of data, and the estranging perceptions of affective neuroscience. Indeed, as an aggregate of cells functions like a machine or organism, Lee’s fascinating prose poems engage a cognitive science of emotion.

In the second prose poem sequence entitled, “I am a hammerhead shark. I make no sound,” the reader encounters “cartilaginoid joints that give under semantic duress,” “a pair of milky eyes that refuse to triangulate,” “a stereoscopic ocean floor,” and an imperative: “Pursue me across numerous divides, over chasms of understatement now clothed in a subtextual, ‘common sense’ racination.” Lee deftly weaves the linguistic, the affective, and the scientific into multifaceted readings. Two-column tables appear at intervals with a photograph, video, or ambient noise: “sounds of water | image of shark in sea.” Like labels with transparent images, or words with unheard sounds -- the word detached from its signified, in turn disconnected from its referent -- Lee’s poems engage simulation and surface. Perhaps “sharkness” is a form of literary experiment where the sign points to a semantic rift rather than a referent: “Sharkness describes a silent skepticism, a roving appetite that sniffs out alterations in the temperature depth beneath a variable surface.” In this mysterious chasm, newness enters the world through the crevices of language: “Sharkness is destiny, is a perfect repetition, the imitation that broke though.”

The following excerpt illustrates Lee’s signature move from the conventional or “textbook” -- instructions on how to resuscitate a shark, for instance -- to metapoetical play:
To resuscitate a shark, to slide two fingers across a serrated organ for “breath,” is to wake up inside a starkly blue-lit room where the text written across torn cotton pages wafts in a circular fan’s efforts. “This is not a page.” “Only you are here.” “You are only here.”

Lee’s poems recall Leslie Scalapino’s aeolotropic series, that they were at the beach, where crystalline poems fracture perception and experience while reflecting one another’s tones, rhythms, and observations. In Lee’s sequence, “The big deal with shopping is composed for the heart,” consumerism and its hypnotic influence upon individual affects -- our emotions -- question what is authentic or genuine in our relationships: “The economy is a robotic circulation of love . . . .” Permutations of data and the robotics of human interactions in an anonymous global populace resonate with the Althusserian notion of interpellation, where subjects internalize hegemonic values through the commerce of art and technology. Human emotions, then, are an outcome of cultural production. With the glow of circuitry in a socio-economic machine, the following prose poem flows between the interpellated subliminal (You will buy that which you did not have), the capricious Romantic (That love can be a many tentacled thing), and metapoetical self-awareness:
You will buy that which you did not have. That love can be a many tentacled thing, but maintains a relational resonance suggests a tectonic circuitry. The shadow of two figures holds hands in a terraced mall. The imaginary in this instance is a ray of (artificial) light. Our unconsciousness has built it, a shibboleth cut from snow.

In Lee’s last sequence, “A dog is only angry because it is angry or afraid,” the reader encounters a series of prescient images in the aesthetic strain of “mental commitment robots” titling the collection:
I can tell the future in the sunrise and the colors of this stream. West emerged as a colorless conclusion, then, an event horizon after which the highway takes over, hair-like data-strips that dissolve across the tongue. The prints in the ground I track for hours lead me to the place I was taught to call home.

A sense of double-consciousness arises with the awareness of poetic constructs internalized as one’s own, or the fact that they are “taught.” How, then, does a poet actually sing? How does newness enter the world, and what is authentically new? Lee responds with questions pointing to language and violence as a site for the poetic body, or vice versa: “When you cut into the blood, when the chain breaks across the muffled throat, isn’t that a new song? Isn’t that something to sing?” Similarly, in her anecdotal prose fragment where “the young daughter struggles to assert her sense of her unique destiny,” the speaker’s “break with her family is simultaneous with an off-shore explosion that jettisons hundreds of millions of dollars worth of robotics into the sea.” So a revolution in poetic language, to borrow from Julia Kristeva’s concept, starts with the rupture at birth: “Submarine dogs converge in a hungry swarm. A baby is born in a dark, damp room meant to simulate a forest.” The search for an authentic voice -- rather than robotic ventriloquism -- commences with the establishment of the speaker’s autonomy. A poet finds her footholds in innovative language, experiments with a montage of discourses, and ultimately, bleeds poetry itself as song.

*****

Karen An-Hwei Lee is the author of Ardor (Tupelo Press, 2008) and In Medias Res (Sarabande Books, 2004). She lives and teaches on the West Coast, where she is a novice harpist.

SUBSISTENCE EQUIPMENT by BRENDA IIJIMA

TOM BECKETT Reviews

Subsistence Equipment by Brenda Iijima
(Faux Press, 2008)

Brenda Iijima's poetry is full of the kinds of accidents and incidents, framings and skewings of same that give me hope for the future of the art, that give me hope for the future period. This is brilliant, difficult work. Subsistence equipment, for sure.

Subsistence Equipment is a chapbook-length poem that is delivered in stanzas of three lines until the last page where one finds a stanza of 2 lines, a stanza of 7 lines, a stanza of 9 lines, and a one-line stanza. Those variant stanzas follow this one:
Space has

No

Patience

Iijima is nothing if not a navigator of the present multi-dementia-zonal moment. Well, that's not very precise and is only partly correct; but it is true to the delirium I feel when I read this decentered, all-over work. It's an environment in which the "city skeletal," the outer urban environment, is one with the "Inner in house enthralled blouses bodice" which "Envelopes physical body." Not to mention mind.

The stanzas are variously notational, instructional, aphoristic, or function as commentary/ segments in fractured narrative(s). This is by no means an exhaustive list of their wily way, those stanzas.

It's a crazy quilt, this poem, of voice and painterly images carried through something like 180 stanzas. I tried counting a couple of times and never came up with the same total. I'm not much of a counter. It doesn't feel counter-intuitive to attempt such measures here though. 180 feels right. A half-circle or possibility of reversal in brackets? Vortices?

I would love to interview Iijima. She seems like a pretty pure synethesiast to me. Her stanzas roil through all of the senses and many of the follies of our late capitalist malaise:
Stereoscopic project facility

Hollyhock bolt the sky still holds vituperators

Martin Luther King Junior, the polis, haven or lawn

This is a poet who never lets up, whose work's value I can only hint at, who is relentless in her laying bare of our psycho-cultural home turf. I want to read all of her work. Maybe then I can myself begin to write.
Who'd be foolish enough to give up

Loving women as a storm impales a gaze

Th is form will become norm predation ease



Relapse irk ooze substantiate

Delicate tower of flesh

Harvest diskette docket wild unsubstantiated desire



To be

Shall we want to fuck

Kindly move these Christmas cacti

The gesture of separating "Th is" so, phonemically, is characteristic and recurs. It's an example of how attuned BI is to the sonic/conceptual landscape of this -scape obsessed poem:
Crocheted

In camouflage

Colors



Someone says

In the

Background



Faces

Wear out

Fastest

If I were a real, tenured, certified and celebrated poet-critic I'd have some way of locking this all down, some way to make it all more digestible and understandable. But this is a gloriously unassimilable text which I will return to for a long time to come.

Subsistence Equipment is a very good chapbook, resistant writing of the best kind. Please consider reading it. It just might make you reconsider what a poem can be. It just might make you wonder where you are. And maybe--I don't know--despite our best efforts, that is the most a poem can do.

*****

Tom Beckett is the author of This Poem/What Speaks?/A Day (Otoliths), Unprotected Texts (Meritage Press), and the curator of the E-X-C-H-A-N-G-E-V-A-L-U-E-S interview series (Otoliths). He is currently working on a year long conversation-in-writing with Geof Huth.